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i never said i'd save you.

i swore i love you's and promised you fresh kisses with every departure.
i swore i would be there, wherever there was. swore i'd care for you
and miss you when you were too far but i never said i'd save you.


you were standing on the edge, with a lit cigarette and an empty head.
you were looking at me and i was looking through you. fifteen floors high,
fifteen years since i first met you and you were standing on the edge.


i was looking right through you, right to the other side.
to the sky, to the melting horizon, to the world you once loved.
i was looking into what you once saw and you swore,


you swore you wouldn't need me to.
i'll kiss you for every colour this world has to offer.


this doesn't feel finished, or finished properly, i'll let it simmer awhile.
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:iconinsanitykeepsmesane:
InsanityKeepsMeSane Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
Wow... this is amazing.
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
O: thank you so much. :D
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:iconinsanitykeepsmesane:
InsanityKeepsMeSane Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010
Thank you for sharing XD
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010
(: :heart:
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:iconlosingmyfaith:
losingmyfaith Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Student Writer
Adore, adore, adore this. Wonderful work! (:
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
:D YAY. thank you! (:
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:iconlosingmyfaith:
losingmyfaith Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Student Writer
You're most welcome (:
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imaduckyrawr Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i realllly like this
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
I['m so glad you do. (:
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Ragno-Veleno Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010
/love.
A lot.
You have a way with words my dear, and that way enchants me every time.
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