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i told myself i'd never compare the two of you
but his eyes are so much brighter


if we still talked i'd tell you, i'm happy now,
in the saddest of ways but i am happy now,
i would say, momentarily, warily,
but somehow i would.  



just don't you tell me, you're happy too.
i want florence's children. all of them.


but i would never wish you anything but the best.
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staphysagria Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've been featured, my lovely.

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platinummyr Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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platinummyr Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I love the raw emotion in those last lines. "I may be acting like I've moved on, but in reality I never had intentions of doing that"
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:iconbookwurmzhao:
I love the first two lines. It took me a while to understand this, though. I had to read it through twice because you're happy too read as dialogue in my head.
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
I always confuse myself when i write, i'd be puzzled if you didn't have to read to twice. [; thank you so much for the favorite!
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
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and then i feature you, if you don't mind, because i like to make people read the things i love. true story (:
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
speechless, thank you so much! :heart: you really have no idea how much i appreciate it. (:
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:iconpaperheartsyndrome:
you're so very welcome. you deserve it. you've always been one of my favorites <3
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