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i told myself i'd never compare the two of you
but his eyes are so much brighter


if we still talked i'd tell you, i'm happy now,
in the saddest of ways but i am happy now,
i would say, momentarily, warily,
but somehow i would.  



just don't you tell me, you're happy too.
i want florence's children. all of them.


but i would never wish you anything but the best.
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staphysagria Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've been featured, my lovely.

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crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
O: THANK YOU! :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
^^ :heart:
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) I love the raw emotion in those last lines. "I may be acting like I've moved on, but in reality I never had intentions of doing that"
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bookwurmzhao Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
I love the first two lines. It took me a while to understand this, though. I had to read it through twice because you're happy too read as dialogue in my head.
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crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
I always confuse myself when i write, i'd be puzzled if you didn't have to read to twice. [; thank you so much for the favorite!
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012   Writer
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and then i feature you, if you don't mind, because i like to make people read the things i love. true story (:
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crashcoursewomb Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
speechless, thank you so much! :heart: you really have no idea how much i appreciate it. (:
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paperheartsyndrome Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012   Writer
you're so very welcome. you deserve it. you've always been one of my favorites <3
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