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scrapping this by ~crashcoursewomb:iconcrashcoursewomb:

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“you want the truth?”

you feel ugly.
you feel fake.
you lie too much.
you lust not love.
you are a sin, just looking at you
puts everyone at risk.
    you are ugly.

“so that’s that then?”

you’re not pretty.
you’re just skin.
   awkward cheekbones,
eyes too dark.
you’re too flawed
so much that
     beautiful is no longer broken
cause you're ugly and broken.
broken people are pretty,
you fucked up broken too,
thanks sweetheart.
inside, outside you are dirt.

“so we’ll leave it at that?”

you wish you were epileptic.
you wish you’d just crash already.
you wish you could just vanish.
you wish you would just fade in a second
   and never come back.
   
should I shake your hand,
smile sincerely and say,
   “it was nice knowing you.”
©2009-2010 ~crashcoursewomb
:iconcrashcoursewomb:

Author's Comments

Does this fit the category despair?
Not completely.
Well then I'll write another, this was an experiment, failed, I know.
Spurs of the moment don't always turn out 'that'ssofcukingbeautiful"


Uhm, I know this sounds stupid.. but how do I scrap this? xD


GET OFF CRACK WOMAN!

The Exies - Ugly :heart:

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:iconsubstitutesadist:
*SubstituteSadist Mar 31, 2009, 9:04:05 PM
that'ssofuckingbeautiful.:heart:

And yes.
It does fit the category of despair. [:

--
"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
:iconcrashcoursewomb:
~crashcoursewomb Mar 31, 2009, 9:12:36 PM
You're nuts missie.
djsalnfdjlsa.
But god do I love you. -huggles-


Idunnothough,thepoemisduesoon.
BUT I WANT TO WRITE ANOTHER!



hmmmmmm, -thinks-

damnit, I have a load of homework. ):
I'm not exaggerating either.
IHATEFAMILYTREESTHATWEREDUEYESTERDAY
andmyfailing-ness.

I'll stop writing without spaces now.
(: btw, THANKKKYOUUUU.

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
:iconsubstitutesadist:
*SubstituteSadist Mar 31, 2009, 9:14:59 PM
xDDDD
I'm not nuts! You're AMAZING. :heart: :hug:
You can write another if you want. xD
I'll accept anything that was written after you became aware of the contest. [:

D:
I have lots of homework too. It's lame. D:<

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"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
:iconfierypoplartree:
~fierypoplartree Apr 1, 2009, 12:54:20 AM
You're amazing, and I love you!
I like the bus home, sometimes.

--
And so it is, just like you said it would be.
Life goes easy on me
...most of the time.
:iconitsxmagik:
=ItsxMagik Apr 1, 2009, 4:47:07 PM
Mmm. So basically your writing is delicious. :heart:

--
make a map of what you see; direct pain effectively.
:iconcinzanoxaqu:
~cinzanoxaqu Apr 1, 2009, 8:36:38 PM
I love so much. It's real, our culture is in to that now adays. It spoke to me though, thank you for it.

--
“A Robin Redbreast in a Cage Puts all Heaven in a Rage”
:iconcrashcoursewomb:
~crashcoursewomb Apr 1, 2009, 8:40:40 PM
:hug:
Thankyou, I'm glad it had that affect on you. :D
I really didn't this one was that great atall.
:P

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
:iconcinzanoxaqu:
~cinzanoxaqu Apr 1, 2009, 8:57:02 PM
I liked it. Maybe because so many of those thoughts are going through my my head and I was unable to place it in words.

Ill look forward to seeing more poetry you put up.

--
“A Robin Redbreast in a Cage Puts all Heaven in a Rage”
:iconcrashcoursewomb:
~crashcoursewomb Apr 1, 2009, 9:13:40 PM
^^
:D I'll look forward to see your comments.

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
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