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the empty space between lips- by ~crashcoursewomb:iconcrashcoursewomb:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Life Stories


sorry, there is no cash back guarantee.
sorry, i didn't mean to put my hand in yours.
sorry,



the world will hate us.




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what does sorry mean.
it means i am apologetic and my lips slipped and yours reacted.  it means half way regret but guilty as the one getting away with bloody shoes on satin skirts.  i'm walking away, and now here you are and there i am. we're not together because there is a crowd brewing between our limbs. it means this isn't cute or lovesick, it means you keep skimming my thighs and i keep messing up your hair. i'd spit at us if i could. i wish, and  i have him and you have her so please stop with the spinal kisses. this audition is not a free run. this is not


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we are not.
because we line up organs
and find new ways to make them tick.
tick, tick explosion.

no, your lips slipped and mine reacted.
©2009-2010 ~crashcoursewomb
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Author's Comments

and ice


look kiddies, she's on a roll to get a rock
and find a wall.
the scrapbook will be brimminnnnggg.

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*rachel-rhapsody Aug 23, 2009, 12:33:18 AM
theres something about this that i love.
i just want to read, tick, tick explosion over and over again because it makes my heart go lahjdgfdhg

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you have lemon rind eyes

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~DreamingPsnLaffingX3 Aug 23, 2009, 6:02:19 AM
this is strange, but in a good way. i really like the way you strung the words together. there's kind of a muted exhilaration to it.

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=ItsxMagik Aug 23, 2009, 2:13:33 PM
This is brilliant. :heart:

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~smilewithlove Aug 23, 2009, 5:42:15 PM
so true, yeah! for sucky personel experiences

Love that you expressed it with so much clarity yet also had a veil of mystery

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The police are charging you with possession of stolen property that’s right… my heart

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~crashcoursewomb Aug 23, 2009, 11:44:45 PM
wow. thank you so much!
(:

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
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~crashcoursewomb Aug 23, 2009, 11:45:07 PM
deary me, i think you are. (:

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
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~crashcoursewomb Aug 23, 2009, 11:45:31 PM
(:
:glomp:
ahhh, thank yooouuu!
i'm so dhfjhasfed that you like. ^^

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that's as bad as secondhand suicide
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*rachel-rhapsody Aug 24, 2009, 12:08:34 AM
:hug: you're most welcome

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you have lemon rind eyes

^project-improve
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